Essay
by
Godfrey
(625)
from
Kenya
- Author's age: 23 years old
Summary
Let us find out first causes of the crisis then how we can solve them.Looking at them,my mind hits first on Africa because it is a continent that is adversely affected. On my point of view, poor leadership is the chief cause of this and unequal distribution of resourses .Corruption is prevalent in Africa and when it comes to energy, they lack proper machinery to exploit it,then over reliance on imported goods becomes the option.This is not to say that other continents are not victims.They usually concentrate too much on industries and neglect agricultural sector.
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Comments
Secondly,the argumentation is fluid, including both the opinion related to the roots of problems,continuing with viable, diverse suggestions.
Thirdly, he developed a good-sensed, positive approach,which defines a solution-oriented thinking.
I especially liked his focus on the importance of the agriculture sector,fact which i rarely saw entrusted with such great importance.And i also agree that the nowadays society truly developed hugely,but the agriculture is the base of food and consequently should be more worked on.
In what the energy is concerned,Godfrey has a starting point from the individual knowledge of the ones involved in the domain,logically linking this with the role of the community.
Finally,the tone of the whole essay,plus the courage statement in the end confers an optimistic voice,encouraging in believing for the best and taking concrete steps in action.
All in all,it is an essay that made me think about this subject and triggered questions in me, which i reckon is the very purpose of such kind of essays,also proving it's quality.
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