Essay
by
Victoria
(436)
from
Bulgaria
- Author's age: 19 years old
Summary
The humanity is at full strain due to the constant rising of oil and food prices. The crisis is no longer spreading only in the developing countries, but in all parts of the world. The purpose of this essay is to outline the main causes of both the food and energy crisis and more importantly, emphasize on the possible ways to solve them. The key ingredients in the solution recipe are boosting the production of local markets instead of tolerating foreign imports, improving social Safety Net departments and educating people for their own responsibilities that can contribute to the global cause.
Comments
First of all, congratulations with your essay. It was well written and you really have some interesting ideas. However, there are some topics which I would like to see a little bit more clarified.
(1) You say that - in an attempt to reduce the food crisis - countries have to boost their own food production which will result in an enriched economy and more competition for the farmers and you give here the example of Africa where financial support results in stability. You say that every country has to boost its own production. I wonder, however, how every country could be able to do this. In developed countries, not much space is left to increase food production - and more productivity on the same space is not reachable because such techniques are already used. Because such countries are very industrialized, it would really take very big efforts to switch some parts of the country to agriculture. And if we would take the efforts, it would take long time to reach the goal.
(2) You say that this would result in an enriched economy. However, I have the impression that this is the idea of countries in autarky/economic self-sufficiency. And doesn't this result in a lower degree of well-being/wealth? One of the basics of economics is that some globalisation of countries or the specificiation of one countrie to a certain sort of products increases wealth. And that aspect is total contradictory...
(3)Concerning the energy crisis - and this is a bit in addition to John - you say that we have to educate people and let them be aware of the impact their individual person has on the climate and the use of energy. In a reply to Johns' essay, you say that this has to happen becaus otherwise people won't listen and do something if they are not aware of their own individual impact. I wonder, however, if this is the case. Are people not aware of their impact? The simple rules (lights, television...) are ubiquitous in the media, Al Gore even made a worldwide known documentary about it, every day you read/hear about the problem and the impact of the individual. And this is already going on for some years... So, I think that people are aware of their own impact, but still they don't listen... So, how would you activate people to reduce their own energy consumption?
I look forward to receiving you reply, thanks in advance and success with your essay!
Sincerely
Brecht
Thank you for your comment :) I have to say it was interesting reading it.
I did say that countries need to boost their own production instead of importing food from foreign countries. However, by saying that, I meant mostly the developing countries. Obviously the food crisis is a global phenomenon, but in the so-called developed countries the crisis hasn’t reached its peak and the consequences can’t be seen as much as in other places (Third world countries for example). For such areas I said this course of action will most probably mark an improvement. As for the time that this is going to take, I can’t really say. But i don’t think that anybody can come up with a magic-wand solution, anyway. It has been made clear that the crisis is going to last for years, therefore nobody expects a solution that can fix it for couple of days, instead.
Honestly, I don’t really understand exactly what you mean in the second point. If a country is in economic self-sufficiency, doesn’t that automatically mean that this particular country will most probably be in a better state than most of the other countries, even in a time of crisis. In such case, the solution about boosting economy obviously doesn’t apply for regions where economy is already more or less stable.
You make an excellent point by saying that many actions have been already taken for letting people know about the impact they have on the climate crisis. Unfortunately, however, this is not the case everywhere. In Bulgaria, for example, people still don’t take the climate crisis issue too seriously. Our TV stations have just started making commercials about the problem and trying to bring awareness. I guess, however, if this movement continues to go strong for some time, people will eventually get more and more interested in the subject, or so I hope! :) As for the people who are aware of their own impact, but still don’t make any change in the way they live....well...judging by the people around me, there is also the habit factor. People are aware that changing few things in their daily life makes a difference. They know, for instance, that they have to turn the TV off when not watching, but they simply have the habit of always leaving it on and for some time they don’t even realize doing it and by the time they notice enough energy has been wasted. Therefore I don’t believe it’s going to be easy, I mean, you don’t go and change people’s habits over night, right? Everyone has to make a bit of an effort. And for those who, for some reason, fancy that one person doesn’t make a difference i would say to them “We ourselves feel that what we are doing is just a drop in the ocean. But the ocean would be less because of that missing drop”
Mother Teresa
Regards,
Tolly
BRAVO!!!!!
Congratulations with your essay, i am really proud and happy about your interesting ideas and humanitarian point of view.
I deeply wish they are more young people as you in Bulgaria and all over the world, who are concern and have great ideas, which at one point will make difference and change to better the place we live!
Good luck with your essay and all the best.
Svetlana
Good luck
Gergana Lalova
Regards,
Gregory
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